Site – Where is the pain
In the violet corners
Under my tongue
at the root of language
At the bottom of my red bag, ringing all hours
Jesus how can you ask that
Here Here Here
Onset – When did the pain start
I have thought about this a good while
My wife says round about the time
we got back from Corfu but
I kept quiet for the first four billion years
Character – What is the pain like
Drama queen bad Dad
alien vicious
wee shite slinking up to the house
with my fucking keys in its hand
Radiation – Does the pain radiate
But I’m flashing like a cursor
nail bomb
permanent terrorist broadcast
from the bottom of the sea
Associations – Any signs or symptoms associated with it
Mother comes down to the garden in her headscarf
with a handful of tumours
tubers
go get your bucket and spade, my mouse
and help me dig them in
Time course – Does it follow any pattern
See: history
See also: structure
of the novel (post-war)
Exacerbating/ relieving factors – Does anything change it
It is not an economy
marriage weather-system
tight shoe or an untuned radio
but sometimes I watch
as it turns on itself like a prom queen
no-one’s watching
Severity – How bad is the pain
Let’s take everything that’s not the pain
Let’s gather that and hang it out in daylight
can we
from the dark nail?